怎么写英语的自我介绍?

第一篇
Good morning.My name is Jessia.I am a graduate of Beijing University.I have majored in English Literature.As an English major,I've more chances to practise English.I do love this language and hope to find a job in which I can use English.Also,I've taken some courses in economics and business adminisration.If I am lucky enough to be accepted by your company,I am sure it will be the best position for me to make use of what I've learned.I know trading companies have become more and more competitive here,and a job requiring responsibility is a good challenge to me.To be sure,there are many things I must learn in this trade.But if there is a chance,I would be glad to take it.Thank you very much!
第二篇
Hi,my name is xxx.I'm xx years old,a middle school student apparently.I love music very much I study hard.My favorite subject is English.I often find chance to practice English.China has joined WTO and Beijing will host the 2008 Olympics,English is more and more important .I will study hard and be dedicate to my homeland.