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Assess environmental effects on the development of intelligence
只要求写enviromental effects 中的一点,200字左右
There’s no doubt that environmental effects including living standard,the background of one’s family,economic conditions and educational status are more or less influence the development of intelligence.Among which mentioned above,educational status is obviously one of the most essential factors that effect the development of intelligence.
Think of a child whose parents are well-educated.Apparently,the parents will create a most educational atmosphere when their child comes to the world.The child,undoubtedly,will be imperceptibly influenced by what parents say or act,thus promote his or her intelligence gradually.
As the saying goes,“Every coin has two sides.”Consequently,it doesn’t mean well-education will absolutely develop one’s intelligence.A child with poor-educated parents can also be quite intelligent with his or her effort.However,the parents couldn’t offer the child an appropriate way to develop intelligence in certain extent.
There’s no assured answer to what is the most important environmental effects on the development of intelligence.Nevertheless,we can’t deny that educational status do effect the development of intelligence and a child who is in a better educational status is more likely to develop his or her intelligence.