Taday my friend with me go shopping and I'm very happy happy .So I feel very lucky .o so

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Taday my friend with me go shopping and I'm very happy happy .So I feel very lucky .o so

今天我和朋友去购物,我感到很高兴。我感觉自己很幸运。

今天我和我的朋友一起去了商店,我感觉十分快乐,也十分幸运。
不过写得不太对,
应该是
I go(went) shopping with my friend today. I feel not only happy, but also lucky.

我觉得应该这样写Today my friend and I went to shopping and I'm so happy.So I feel very lucky.
今天我和我的朋友去逛街,我觉得非常开心.所以我觉得我十分幸运..

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