英语作文 Hi!zhangruo,haha~I'm zheng qiuyi,the chinese girl .Do you remenber me?It is nice to meet you and your friend in huangshan.You give me an unforgettable memory.Have you been at home I know that you will return to America soon.so now,i have some pieces of photoes which we take during our journey to show you.We felt very happy although the time was very short.please call me next time you coming to china again ,i could accompany you to my hometown and

the->that is->was
give->gave
have you been at home? 这个你要表达什么？ some pieces of photoes->some photos take->took 最好这整句改成 i want to show you some photos which we took during our journey.
next time you coming to-> next time when you come to could->can
accoumpany you to my hometown->show you arround my hometown
aboat->about stadying abroad, that it is->studying abroad is my goal.

Hi,zhangruo,
haha~I'm zheng qiuyi,the chinese girl.Do you remember me?It is nice to meet you and your friend in huangshan.It was an unforgettable memory.
Have you been at home?I know that you will return to America soon.I have some photos which we took during our journey that I would like to show you.
It was a very enoyable trip although it was a little short.please call me the next time you coming to china again,i can accompany you to my hometown and we can enjoy some nice snacks.I am sure it will be another enjoyable trip.
thank you for your information about studying abroad.studying abroad is my goal.I have learned a lot from you.
Well,i am looking forward to hearing from you.