My heart will never change ,the most important position in my heart is left only for you!

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My heart will never change ,the most important position in my heart is left only for you!

我的心永远不会变,我心中最重要的位置只为你而留。
要说语法错误,这应该分成两个句子,因为有两个谓语动词。其次,我觉得把 position 换成place要好点。即改为My heart will never change .The most important place in my heart is left only for you!或者改成定语从句:My heart will never change ,the most important place of which is left only for you!意思一样的

我心(爱你的)不变,我心里最重要的位置只为你留着........
不错,就是有点中式

My love for you will never change,there's always a special place for you in my heart.You are the one!
我对你的爱永不变,在我心里,永远为你保留一个特殊的位置.你是我的唯一!