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题目：Traffic Jam
In modern society,with the development of cities,there is an inreasing number of people moving to cities,which leads to many problems.Now the traffic problems are more and more serious.
The main traffic problem is traffic jam,which influences many people's life.When traffic jam happening,it may takes a long time for some people to go to work or school.In addition,it wastes our time.
In my poinion,people ought to obey traffci rules.As an saying goes,rules are meant to be followed,not broken.It is encouraged that people go outside by cycle or by bus instead of by car.If these measures are taken,the traffic pressure will be lightened.
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