希望能将这篇英语对话 语法 单词 句式上等错误纠正一下

希望能将这篇英语对话 语法 单词 句式上等错误纠正一下
(Lisa is Lucy’s friend.Last night Lisa lived at Lucy”home.The story starts at this moring)
Lucy:What's that awful noise upstairs?
Lisa:It woke me up at five o'clock in the morning.
Lucy:It sounds like they're tearing the walls down up there.
Lisa:I think they are,literally.It sounds like they're renovating.
Lucy:That's all fine and good,but can't they do it during decent hours?
Lisa:They don't realize that not everyone gets up before the crack of dawn.
Lucy:And today's Sunday!I'm going up there to set them straight.
(Then Lucy comes back)
Lisa:How’s it going?
Lucy:They said that they must work as fast as they can to get it done.So they start early.
Lisa:Oh that’s so serious.
Lucy:Yes.Then I told them that Sunday is our only day to sleep in and I wanted them to work later.
Lisa:Are they agree?
Lucy:They promise that they”ll start at ten o”clock.
Lisa:OK.But I don”t think it's appropriate to make noise like that on a Sunday.
Lucy:That”right.They have promised that they would be done soon.
Lisa:I hope so.
Lucy:Have you ever had this kind of problem in your community?
Lisa:Of course.One of my neighbours ofen holds party during the night.And the nosie is so heavy that I can’t sleep.
Lucy:Have you ever talk this matter with him?Perhaps he haven’t realized that he has disturbed you.
Lisa:Maybe.But it’s better than before.
Lucy:I think we should communicate with our neighbours more frequently.