帮忙点评一下我的英语作文
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帮忙点评一下我的英语作文
MY FAVORITE WAY TO SCHOOL
There are many kinds of transportation in the world.Students have to choose one of the ways to school.Some like to go there by car and some like to go there by bike.For me,I'd like to take school buses better.But why?
First,it is sofe to do so.Most of the people on the school buses are students.And the drivers drive very well.So we don't have any danger to do so.
Secondly,it is very convenient to do so.Yon can go to school in this way wherever you are.And the stop can be near your home.You may not to walk too long.
In one word,I like going to school bus best.How do you like to go to school?
答
大约扣两分,Secondly改为second,school bus 中加by