写一篇30-40词的短文介绍你的一位朋友.帮忙看看我能打多少分啊?
问题描述：
写一篇30-40词的短文介绍你的一位朋友.帮忙看看我能打多少分啊?
主要内容包括:1.他名叫王刚；2.12岁；3.他在初一5办； 4.Tom是他的好朋友,来自美国.他们在同班；5.英语老师是Mr Zhong,他是一位好老师,也是他们的好朋友.
下面是我写的
My friend
My friend is Wang Gang.He is twelve years old.He is in Class Five ,Graed Seven.Tom is his good friend .He is from the U.S.A.Thire are in the same chass .Mr.Zhong is thire English teacher .He is a good teacher .And thire good friend.
答
你们有教过从句了吗,你用的都是单句,如果教过的话可以用点复合句.例如
Mr.Zhong is thire English teacher who is very kind.
还有一点点小错,Graed 改成Grade,
Thire are in the same chass .Thire 改They