英语改错 十处错误

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英语改错 十处错误
My family and i move to the US in 2003 from West Africa.In our first week in the US,they were walking towards a park when an American family went past to us .Their little boy said “Hi”to us when we got closely.We had no idea when to say.We did not know what "Hi" meant at that time .We decide to say "Hi" back,not know if it was the right thing to do.Anyway,few days later,we learned that it was the right thing to do .And since that time,we have formed the habit in saying "Hi"to friends,colleagues,and neighbor as well.

My family and i move(moved后面有具体的时间,要用过去时) to the US in 2003 from West Africa.In our first week in the US,they(we,后面是us,所以这里的主语应该是we) were walking towards a park when an Ameri...