英语改错 10处错误
英语改错 10处错误
My friend Jack who was always working hardly so that he could earn enough to buy a car of his own.He used to say,“My life will be better when I get a nicer car.”It took him more than three years to make his dreams come true.However,Jack was not satisfied with what he has achieved.He worked even harder,hoped that he would able to buy a big house with a beautiful garden .One day,I told himself that happiness is a journey,not a destination.Try to do what you like and enjoy what you can enjoy at the present,and you will feel regretful when you are too old to do anything.
第一行：去掉who（不然没有主句） hardly--hard（hardly是副词,意思是几乎不,hard也是副词,是努力地）第二行：nicer--nice（没有比较）第四行：has--had（前后时态一致） would able--would be able（没有动词） hop...