高一英语作文my favorite city

Beijing,one of the most beautiful cities in the world,is one of my favorite cities.There are many interest places to go in Beijing.There are three that I like most,and they are Forbidden City,Tienanmen Square,and Great Wall.I still remember the first time that I went to Beijing.It was summer time,and I really feel tired after I visited the Great Wall,because the weather is too hot.Besides these interest places,I also love the food in Beijing.For example,the Peking duck and hot pot are my favorite.Thus,Beijing is my favorite city.
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