My all friends came to my birthday party last Sunday .修改病句

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• My all friends came to my birthday party last Sunday .修改病句
• My all friends came to my birthday party last Sunday .修改病句
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• My all friends came to my birthday party last sunday.以上句子错在哪里,怎样改