这句英文写的对么

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这句英文写的对么
It is dangerous to drink the dirty water without purification because the untidy water may has a large amounts of harmful chemicals.

It is dangerous to drink the dirty water(不用加the:泛指) without purification because the untidy water may has a large amounts(amount与不可数名词连用,应改为numbers) of harmful chemicals.It is dan...