关于我的梦想英语短文.

My dream
When I grow up,I'm going to do what I want to do.I want to move somewhere exciting.Hollywood sounds like a good place that I could enjoy.Because there are many famous actors there.I want to be an actor.So first,I should go to the movies to learn the acting.Then,I'm going to be a student at an acting school in Hollywood.And I'm going to study French at the same time.Next I'm going to finish my first movie.One day,I'm retire somewhere quiet and beautiful.
I'm sure my dream will come true!
自己亲手写的哦!希望楼主选我..
中文翻译:
我的梦想
当我长大时,我会做我自己想做的事.我想要住到刺激的地方.好莱坞听起来像是一个我会喜欢的地方.因为那里有很多著名的演员.我想成为一名演员.所以首先,我应该去看电影,去学习他们的演技.然后,我将要在好莱坞上表演课.与此同时,我还要学习法语.接着,我将去完成我的第一部电影.有一天,我会在安静美丽的地方退休.
我相信我的梦想会成真!
有些地方是意译的哦!
好辛苦!楼主选我哦!