Dear Paul and Tom,Have a nice day!How are you doing and how is your business?We have 10 containe

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Dear Paul and Tom,Have a nice day!How are you doing and how is your business?We have 10 containe
Dear Paul and Tom,
Have a nice day!How are you doing and how is your business?
We have 10 containers with style # 602 in our warehouse now.After last shipment there is not enough space for storaging the furniture,because this style we made especially for you under your order.
On the basic of our long coorperation we’d like to offer our best price and give you a large discount 25%.As you know,the old price USD 650.00 per set is not profitable to us,and today by this price is not enough for production material even.For us like samll factory discount 25% is very big concession,that we loss a lot.
We hope you can ship all the 10 container without partial shipments.Before that we guarance quality this item until satisfaction of your QC,so pls kindly accept the new price USD487.50.
We will ____ for your early reply!
请帮我看看 这封信语法有什么错误,请帮忙用其他颜色改正,

1.Have a nice day!中的Have不要顶这格写,留2个字母距离
2.How are you doing 中的How改为What