麻烦帮我修改一下这个英语作文,
麻烦帮我修改一下这个英语作文,
as we all know that all the people hope to have a good health that they can do something what they want to do .so how to keep healthy is really a problem .first of all ,to make exercise often can make up a strong body,so that we can less fill ill .secondly,keep balance diet also very important .it is reported that so many people are don't have their breakfast ,and say the disadvantage for do this .so all of us should have the breakfast everyday.by doing there what i state you will have a good health.
as we all know that all the people are hoping to have a good health that they can do what they desire .so how to be healthy is really a problem .first of all ,to do exercises regularly can make up a strong body,so that we won't get sick so easily .secondly,keep balance diet is also very important .it is reported as a fact that so many people are not having their breakfast ,and the disadvantage for do this .so we should have breakfast everyday.by doing this ,you will have a good health in the future.