英语改错:When father bought me a computer for a birthday present in last year,I felt very excited

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英语改错:When father bought me a computer for a birthday present in last year,I felt very excited

I felt very excited when I recived a computer as a birthday gift from my father last year.直接用状语从句就行了,没那么复杂.原句中的for用法不对,in多余.