英语改错:When father bought me a computer for a birthday present in last year,I felt very excited

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英语改错:When father bought me a computer for a birthday present in last year,I felt very excited

When father bought me a computer as a birthday present last year,I felt very excited

as a birthday present
in last year去掉in

When father bought me a computer for a birthday present (in) last year,I felt very excited

last year前面不用加IN

正确答案应该是When father bought me a computer for a birthday present (in) last year,I felt very excited
把in去掉 其他地方没错的

for改为as

I felt very excited when I recived a computer as a birthday gift from my father last year.直接用状语从句就行了,没那么复杂.原句中的for用法不对,in多余.

When father bought me a computer “AS” a birthday present “-” last year,I felt very excited
“作为”一件生日礼物;last year 前面不用in