检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误

检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误
Last year,after we gurtuated form junior high school.We organized a journey to Fenghuang.
Phoenix is an old town which surrounded by mountains and river,It's
famous for the night in the town.when dark comes,with all the light lighted,a lots of people walked on the
road,the bar opened,the old town falled into happiness.
Not only the beautiful view attract me,but also I enjoy the time we play
together.we were shopping and visiting
the town in day.Singing and drinking in the bar at night.Moreover,we play
majiang and pork until next morning.
This is an unforgetable journey.I believe that I won't let it disappeared in my memory