请检查这篇英语作文的语法,I like looking out the window in my room.I miss you when we are not together,and I try to find you and look forward to your return.My mother.Since I was born,I have never seen my biological father.Mother would not say anything about him,too.Whenever thought of my father’s departure,I was felt that I would never obtain his love and that my life was incomplete.But my mother has cleaned up all the doubts and worries which were stucked in my
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I like looking out the window in my room.I miss you when we are not together,and I try to find you and look forward to your return.My mother.
Since I was born,I have never seen my biological father.Mother would not say anything about him,too.Whenever thought of my father’s departure,I was felt that I would never obtain his love and that my life was incomplete.But my mother has cleaned up all the doubts and worries which were stucked in my heart.She makes me feel warm and gives me all her love.I always think mother is a woman who deserves my respect.
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不错，只是fathers写错了
1.第三行的My mother就两个单词放在那里.
2.I was felt that I would never obtain his love...将was 去掉.I felt that...
3.that my life was incomplet,这句前面说我觉得我永远不会得到他的爱,后面改为,生命永远也不会完整,这样更通顺.改为:that my life would never be complete.
4.my mother has cleaned up all the doubts and worries which were...这句时态前面为现在完成时后面为一般过去时,时态一致更好,改为.which have been stucked in my hearts all the time