这个句子有错么 I want to make you happy!Because seeing you smile make me happy···

问题描述:

这个句子有错么 I want to make you happy!Because seeing you smile make me happy···
我想问下
I want to make you happy!Because seeing you smile make me happy···
这个句子的时态有没有错
其他地方还有错误的地方么?

这是中文式英文
后面应该是
seeing you(r) smile make(s) me happy