英语作文 The teacher 这样写对吗?

英语作文 The teacher 这样写对吗?
我的作文题目是The teacher 但我写的内容是如下 帮我看看会不会扣题 错很多
My English teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. There is always a smile on her face.
Miss Huang likes singing. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is a good dancer, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing. Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favorite color is blue, because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.