请帮我看看句子语法the most important quality is warm--hearted.A warm--hearted person will help you to find out and overcome your shortcomings when you are in trouble.Once I saw a group member falling into the water carelessly who was saved by me so early that keep his life.不需要翻译，只帮我看看语法正确否
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the most important quality is warm--hearted.
A warm--hearted person will help you to find out and overcome your shortcomings when you are in trouble.
Once I saw a group member falling into the water carelessly who was saved by me so early that keep his life.
不需要翻译，只帮我看看语法正确否
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最重要的品质就是善良、热心
一个善良的人会在你遇到麻烦时找到并帮你战胜你的缺点
有一次我看到了一个不小心掉进水里被我很容易的就上来的人
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第二句不对，see sb doing sth 表示看见某人正做某事，如 I saw them playing soccer. 改：Once I saw a goup member calling for help in the water and I saved him.
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Once I saw a group member falling into the water carelessly who was saved by me so early that keep his life.有问题.who was saved by me so early that keep his life 这个句子中关系代词时who,先行词应是I....