帮我看看 我给一教授的英文信 这样能成么
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帮我看看 我给一教授的英文信 这样能成么
I am really glad to have your letter in reply,Thank you so much for your time and all you have done for me.
Because i am work for a art festival here in China those years .(I am the one of the curator),I earn some money from it .so I think I can support myself in the university during the dissertation research time .
For the dissertation theme .I think I can write more things and change some place to make the idea more clearly .if you can give me some further advice ,I will be very appreciate .
答
我把感觉需要改动的地方写在后面的括号里,并附上自己的建议.开头和结尾一般很模式化的,可以找一些直接套上去用.I am really glad to have（receive） your letter in reply（觉得in reply可以省略）,Thank you so mu...