英语自我介绍就改My name is XXX.My family name is X.I was borned in XXX on X.I like study and it is not bad in school.In school we can do some sport after class.And I like sport too,Such as badminton,basketball and football.however,violin is my habby too.I have a few lesson before.But I have to quit.Because I have no timeto play it.My family inclue my Mum and Dad.You know.I have a sweet family.In supper we can talk all the subject of a talk.So we have a big fa

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英语自我介绍就改
My name is XXX.My family name is X.I was borned in XXX on X.I like study and it is not bad in school.In school we can do some sport after class.And I like sport too,Such as badminton,basketball and football.however,violin is my habby too.I have a few lesson before.But I have to quit.Because I have no timeto play it.My family inclue my Mum and Dad.You know.I have a sweet family.In supper we can talk all the subject of a talk.So we have a big family day too in sunday.My uncle,aunt are go tograndparents house to have a dinner.This is the introduction of me.
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我建议第一句话 这么改:
my name is xxx who is memeber of my family .
然后:
I like studying and i have great mark in school .In school we can do a lot of exercises after class ,such as badminton ,basketball ,football etc. and l ike doing exercises.

borned - born ( 出生)
do some sports,sports体育运动
my habby- hobby,have,lesson-had ,lessons
my family inclue my Mum and Dad- There are three people in my family.I am the only child.
a sweet- a happy in supper- during supper subjects- topics
in sunday- On Sunday,My uncle,aunt- My uncle and aunt
grandparents- grandparents'
of me- of mine