英语翻译*不是随心所欲,而是一个自我约束的机会The freedom is not the chance for you to do the things you want,but the chance for you to rule yourself.The freedom is not the chance to follow your inclinations,but the chance to self-control.这句呢.

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英语翻译
*不是随心所欲,而是一个自我约束的机会The freedom is not the chance for you to do the things you want,but the chance for you to rule yourself.
The freedom is not the chance to follow your inclinations,but the chance to self-control.这句呢.

两句在大致上都正确,在冠词上修改一下就好.
freedom不必加the;chance前用a