英语作文、my mother`s day求修改My mother is busy every day,She is a teacher .She teaches math.she works in the school.every morning,she making breakfast for me.she goes work at 7:30.she go to work by bike.she likes read newspaper at 2:30.in the evening .shegoes home at 6:30.she watches TV at 8:00.then goes to bed.this is my mother`s day急.求修改.

总之谢谢了，谁帮忙修改一下！ My mother’s day My mother is an （原文为a，错误。因为English读音以元间开头）English teacher and she likes

My mother is busy every day,She is a teacher .She teaches math.she works in the school.every morning,she making breakfast for me.she goes work at 7:30.she go to work by bike.she likes read newspaper at 2:30.in the evening .she goes home seven o'clock. she watches TV at 8:00.then goes to bed. this is my mother day
整篇文章还是可以的，就是mother‘s day是错的- -那是母亲节的意思，下次注意

My mother is busy every day,She is a teacher .She teaches math.she works in the school.every morning,she making breakfast for me.she goes work at 7:30.she go to work by bike.she likes read newspaper at 2:30.in the bad

My mother is busy every day.She is a teacher and she teaches math,she works in the school.
Every morning,she makes breakfast for me. She goes to work at 7:30. and she go to work by bike. She likes reading newspaper at 2:30.
She goes home at 6:30. she often watches TV at 8:00 in the evening ，then she goes to bed.
This is my mother`s day

My mother is busy every day.She is a teacher .She teaches Math.She works in a junior/middle/senior school.Every morning,she makes breakfast for me and goes to work at 7:30a.m.She go to work by bike.She likes reading newspapers at 2:30p.m.She goes home at 6:30.In the evening,she watches TV at 8:00p.m.Then she goes to bed. This is my mother's day.

My mother is busy in every day,She is a teacher .She teaches math.she works in a school.every morning,she makes breakfast for me. then she goes to work at 7:30. she usually goes to work by bike. she likes reading newspaper at 2:30.in the evening .she goes home at 6:30. she watches TV at 8:00. and then she goes to bed.
here is my mother`s day

My mother is busy every day.She is a teacher .She teaches math.She works in the school.Every morning,she makes breakfast for me.She goes to work at 7:30.She goes to work by bike.She likes reading newspaper at 2:30p.m.In the evening .She goes home at 6:30.She watches TV at 8:00.Then goes to bed. This is my mother`s day
如果你只是要改语法，这样就好了
以下是我写的
My mother is busy every day.She is a math teacher.She works in the school.Every morning,she makes breakfast for me before she set off for work at 7:30.She used to go to work by bike and be fond of reading newspaper at 2:30p.m.She always reaches home at 6:30p.m.Watching TV is her another interest.She likes to enjoy it at 8:00 before goes to bed.
This is my mother's day

你的原文有些语病,并显得凌乱.我重新整理：My mother is a teacher.She teaches math in a school.She is busy every day.Early in the morning she makes breakfast for me.She goes to work at 7:30am on her bike...

My mother is busy every day,She is a teacher .She teaches math.She works in school. Every morning,she makes breakfast for me.she goes to work at 7:30.she goes to work by bike.she likes reading newspaper at 2:30 pm. In the evening, she goes home at 6:30.she watches TV at 8:00. Then she goes to bed. This is my mother`s day
写的不错啊，注意一下 主谓一致，呵呵