英语作文:In the park 用现在进行时 要写出公园的风景

There are many people. Some boys are playing soccer. Two girls are talking under a tree. Some people are boating in the lake. By the lake， some women are walking. Look ,there are some children. They are flying kites.All the people are happy.

It’s Sunday morning .My mother and I are gong to the park. There are a lot of people in the park. Some children are running. A dog is running after them . Four women are sitting there They are talking. Two girls are playing with a big bal near them ..Three old men are standing under a big tree. They are watching the children. There is a river there. Many young people are dancing near it. There is a boat on the river. And an old man is sitting in the goat. He is dishing.
　　Everyone in the park is having a good time. We are having a good time, too.
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It's a beautiful sunny day.In the park ,there are many people.Some boys are playing soccer.Two girls are talking under a tree.Some people are boating in the lake.By the lake,some women are walking.Look ,there are some children.They are flying kites.All the people are happy.

第几人称的呀，字数要多少，要求写详细点行不。