求大神修改英语作文Dear Mary.I‘m sorry to heard your mother is ill.Last Sunday,I went hiking with my friends.At 7：00 in the morning we met at school gate.We brought a few bottles of water and some foods.We went to Wenfeng park and then we climbed the hill.On the top of the hill we could see how beautiful in my city.How about you in these day?Yours,Lida

Dear Mary.
I‘m sorry to heard your mother was ill.Last Sunday,I went hiked with my friends.At 7：00 in the morning we met at school gate.We brought a few bottles of water and some food.We went to Wenfeng park and then we climbed the hill.On the top of the hill we could see how beautiful in my city。
How about you in these day？
Yours，
Lida

Dear Marry,
I‘m sorry to hear your mother is ill. Last Sunday, I went hiking with my friends. At 7：00 in the morning we met at school gate. We brought a few bottles of water and some food. We went to Wen Feng Park and then we climbed the hill. On the top of the hill we could see how beautiful our city is!
How about you recently?
Yours,
Linda

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I‘m sorry to heard your mother is ill. is改为 was吧

heard后面加that 。is改为was。could改成can。in删掉

Dear Mary,I‘m sorry to hear your mother is ill.Last Sunday I went hiking with myfriends.We met at school gate at 7：00 in the morning and took several bottles ofwater and some food in the bags.We wen...

I'm sorry to+动词原型不是吗？所以heard应该改成hear