高手帮我看看下面这篇英语自我介绍有没有病句啊Hello,everyone!My name is Li Yi Meng.I am 12 years old.I am a happy and lovly girl.I like animal,i like color,i like food.I love nature.I like stady,and i am good at dancing,panting and instrumental music.I have a lovly family:my father,my mother,and i.I love my family!That is me and my family!

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高手帮我看看下面这篇英语自我介绍有没有病句啊
Hello,everyone!My name is Li Yi Meng.I am 12 years old.I am a happy and lovly girl.I like animal,i like color,i like food.I love nature.I like stady,and i am good at dancing,panting and instrumental music.I have a lovly family:my father,my mother,and i.I love my family!That is me and my family!

like to do一贯做的。已成习惯。
like doing 一次做的。
like喜欢意思,接名词、代词、动名词或者不定式。

你的可爱的拼错了 lovely
studying 因为like doing sth
good at playing instrumental music
love my families 是你的家人用复数
而且像like 后面的名词连起来 只说一个like就可以了 显得简洁

我会这样写:
Hello,everyone!My name is Li Yi Meng.I am 12 years old.I am a happy and lovely girl.I like cute animal,colorful plant and delicious food.I love nature very much!Every day I study hard.My hobbies are dancing,painting and insturmental music.There are three people in my family:my father,my mother and I.My parents love me and I love them too.

语病基本没有
建议同类型的句子合并来写,要不看着有点别扭