我写的这篇英语小短文对吗Today is sunday.I’m going to have a busy day. I’m going to visit my grandparents with my parents this morning.then,in evening,I’m going go to the cinema with my mother. that will be fun.I can’wait. 急!
问题描述：
我写的这篇英语小短文对吗
Today is sunday.I’m going to have a busy day. I’m going to visit my grandparents with my parents this morning.then,in evening,I’m going go to the cinema with my mother. that will be fun.I can’wait. 急!
答
Today is sunday.but I will have a busy day today. I’m going to visit my grandparents with my parents this morning.Then，in the evening，I will go to the cinema with my mother.That will be fun.I can’wait for it.
答
没有语法错误.简单的语句,但是挺对的.