请帮我看看这几句英语写得对不对1.In the box,it's a book which I bought in America for my first time going there.2.Look to this bar.Is it strange?3.I hate them two!4."新的一岁"怎么说?5.in the new coming time（我想表达“在新到来的日子里”）如果有错误请帮我纠正一下,
问题描述：
请帮我看看这几句英语写得对不对
1.In the box,it's a book which I bought in America for my first time going there.
2.Look to this bar.Is it strange?
3.I hate them two!
4."新的一岁"怎么说?
5.in the new coming time（我想表达“在新到来的日子里”）
如果有错误请帮我纠正一下,
答
1.是不是可以这么写
There is a book in the box, which I bought in America where I went for my first time.
4.new one year
5.in the new coming days
答
1.In the box,there is a book which I bought in America at my first time going there.
2.Look this bar.Is it strange?
3
4 a new year
5 in the coming days