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My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
Great Changes in My Hometown
I used to live in a small town with trees all around. There was no tall building and the only street was narrow. Just outside the town， there was a river. You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. People here lived a simple life.
Great changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings， big department stores and factories everywhere. Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets. But with the development of the industry， we have fewer trees. Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. We must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful.

Changes in my hometown
My hometown is XXX.It is a beautiful city.30 years ago,the city was ugly.
There were only a few people.There weren’t cars,buses or taxis.But there were
many bikes.There were a few factories.There was a harbour.There were some
streets.Now the city is very beautiful.There are a lot of tall buildings.
There are a lot of people.There’s a subway,too.There are plenty of highways.
Life is very fast now.I like this city very much.
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