雅思作文求修改

雅思作文求修改
There is a table illustrating the new cars sold in usa in 2000 to 2005 that from four different counties.by and large the total quantity illustrated a mild decrease over this figure of sold cars.in particular，usa has the largest figure of new cars sold in 2000，but japanese cars sold surpassed american cars in 2005 while german had a stabilization in the sales.the number of sold what came from usa at 4.2 million while there has a dramatic descend took place was seen in the figure at 2.6 million，during the years 2000 to 2005 a significant rise trowing light in the number of japanese cars sold at 2.2 million to 3.4 million.whereas a slightly increase in german cars from 0.2 million in 2000 to 0.3 million in 2005.then sales of south korea cars remained unchanged at 1.1 million.
求改失态复数什么的错误，还有各种错误，不要改句式或什么.