这是我写的六级作文
这是我写的六级作文
How to Improve Students’ Mental Health(150 words)
Nowadays,students’ mental unhealth has brought about lots of problems such as delinquency,taking drug and so forth.Therefore,the duty how to improve their mental health is not only for their parents but also for schools.
It is known to all that students’ learning efficiency will be badly affected,if they’re in pressure for a long time and couldn’t adjust their mind.It is vital to schools to find effective ways to help them get rid of the pressure.First,schools can organize interesting activities to the students,which are able to help them relax.In addition,don’t arrange too much extra homework for them.Too much homework isn’t able to improve their study progress and even burden them.
From what has discussed above,schools should try them best helping students improve their mind.But as students themselves,they also should learn to adapt their present school life to help them adjust their mind.
First,schools can organize interesting activities to for the students,From what has been discussed above,schools should try their best to help students improve their mind.除此之外 观点怎么样条理很清晰，在how 上能再适当发挥写更好，比如organize interesting activities to the students，可以具体指出组织哪些活动那么想语法错误 什么之类的有吗 还有10分能打多少？麻烦你帮我下taking drug and so forth. Therefore, the duty how to improve their mental health is not only for their parents but also for schools. 这句话逻辑上不是很通顺。个人认为可以改为 Therefore,to improve their mental health has become an important and urgent proplem which is to be solved . 能打6、7分吧。内容再充实些更好活动可不可以写 activities like basketball games, music appreciation and so on.可以。提供心理咨询也可以Thank you. 以后有不懂的请教您！Not at all