It was a good chance to improve myself,and I determined to try my best to complete the job

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It was a good chance to improve myself,and I determined to try my best to complete the job
这句话有语法错误吗?

语法上没有错误,不过建议把and 改成so,那些连接更通顺
那是一个提升我自己的好机会,我决定尽我最大努力去完成这项工作.语法上没有错误,不过建议把and 改成so,那些连接更通顺是不是 I determined 或者 I was dertermined 都可以的?I determined 可以 I was dertermined 不行,成被动了,我被决定,