帮忙修改雅思作文

帮忙修改雅思作文
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in very subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are more and more female students in universities.So universities want to keep balance with male students.I don't think this is neccessary.
A large amount of people think some courses only adjust for woman such as nurse and teacher of kindergarten.Because they think woman should do better than man.So these courses in the universities are full of girls.By contrast,if a girl is studying at a army school or university,many people will feel strange.
In my opion,people are moving into professions once dominated by the other gender.For instance,nurse field are not for women.There are more and more boys study this course in thier universities.Young people should not stay by their old idea which leads to a vicious circle.They can't choose their favorite courses.
That university places sould go to those who deserve them,on the basis of university entrance tests whether for man and woman.If you deserve to learn you should choose every courses you want.I think this is the best method.