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In March 28th,a mining accident happened in wangjialing mine.this was one of mining accidents in March.It tensed up our hearts again.Though many people go to the rescue,we still see a lot of dead.153 people trapped in this mine disaster,and there was no informathion in 8 nights.We are disheartened to think that this will be also a sorrowful story.
The miracle of life occurred in the Ching Ming Festival,115 workers rescued one by one.all of the people was cheering for the strong life.Today we are still working to rescue,we never give up,because we still pray for the living life.
In 2006,the tv player soldiers’ sudden attack let us know a word :never abundon nor give up.It fire up everybody who against difficulties.A very ordinary soldier prove the word,because of his hard-working and insistence.He get what he wanted.In this mining accident,Both of the rescue team and the trapped person are not give up,so they also get it.The life saved because they insist.
To us,if we want to succed in doing something,we should also never give up.never give up hope,never give up chance,and never give up to do it.thought the path to victory is very difficult.so when we meet the difficult ,and you can’t resolve it at once.Just think abou the people who survive in the mine.Tell yourself not to give up,anything you can complete,just continue to try to do it,and the final victory belongs to you.