英语演讲稿求改
英语演讲稿求改
英语演讲稿一篇,求修正语法错误+美化润色,原意不能变.有好的加悬赏分.
My favorite movie is Everybody’s fine.It told us a story about a father travelled between different cities in the USA to see his children.The old man lived in the countryside and his children lived in different cities.His wife has gone,so he missed his children very much.Every weekend he called his children to come home to eat dinner together,and they all agreed.So the old man cooked the dinner very carefully every time.But every weekend,his children all canceled on him at the last minute.Every weekend at last,he had to have the delicious food alone.
Lastly one day,he decided,although all of his children didn’t show up for a visit,he would go to visit them.He tidied his travelling bag and started the travel.
First,he went to the youngest son’s home,his name is David.He waited in front of the door for a long time but his son didn’t come back.So he left a letter and started the trip of meeting his other children.On the way near David’s home,he found some pictures drawn by David.He was happy and he thought David has become an artist.
Then the old father went to meet other children.They were in different cities,they had different work and they also had their own happiness and unhappiness.
When the old father asked his children:Are you happy?Their answers are surprisingly identical:they were very fine and very happy.
But the old father discovered something not very good:
Amy told the old father that Jack was a good student in the school but he found that was not true.However,at the airport,Amy said that she was happy.And the old father said ‘A happy one.First one on my list.’
Robert told his father that he was a conductor in a orchestra,but the old father found Robert was just a drummer.The old father was not very happy but Robert also said that he was really fine.Anyway,the old father was happy because Robert was fine,too.
Then,the old father went to see his daughter Rosie.He noticed that Rosie rent a very impressive apartment and became an unmarried mother.
About everything the old father found and thought,the children told a lot of lies to deceive him.The old father was not very happy.
So,the old man wanted to go home.But on his way home,his heart disease attacked all at once.
After heard the bad news,Frank’s children went to the hospital as fast as they can.When frank was rescued,he saw his children around him except David.Then,he knew David has been in the heaven.He accepted the fact.
At the end of the film,Frank was having Christmas dinner with Rosie,Robert and Amy.Frank said:Everybody’s fine.
I love this movie.It didn’t have any special spectacle,but it also moved us a lot,because it had a lot of family love.
略略润色就好,主要修改语法或者单词拼写错误.讲的是一部电影,如果修改的大神看过就更好了没看过也没关系.电影叫天伦之旅
My favorite movie is Everybody’s fine.It told us a story about a father travelled between different cities in the USA to see his children.The old man lived in the countryside and his children lived in different cities.His wife has gone,so he missed his children very much.Every weekend he called his children to come home for family reunion,and they all agreed.So the old man cooked the dinner very carefully every time.But every weekend,his children stood him up in the last minute.At last,he had to dine alone and lonely.
Finally,one day,he decided,although all of his children didn’t show up for a visit,he would go to visit them.He packed his bag and started the journey.
First,he went to the youngest son’s home,his name is David.He waited in front of the door for a long time but his son didn’t show up.So he left a letter and went on to meet his other children.On the way away from David’s,he found some pictures drawn by hiim.He was happy and he thought David has become an artist.
Then the old father went to meet other children.They were in different cities,they had different work and they also had their own happiness and unhappiness.
When the old father asked his children:Are you happy?Their answers are surprisingly identical:they were very fine and very happy.
But the old father discovered something not very good:
Amy told the old father that Jack was a good student in the school but he found that it was not true.However,at the airport,Amy said that she was happy.And the old father said ‘A happy one.First one on my list.’
Robert told his father that he was a conductor in an orchestra,but the old father found Robert was just a drummer.The old father was not very happy but Robert also said that he was fine enough Anyway,the old father was happy because Robert was fine,too.
Then,the old father went to see his daughter Rosie.He noticed that Rosie rent a very impressive（房子基本不用impressive来形容,如果想表达贵的话用expensive,奢华的话用luxurious） apartment and became a single mother.
About everything that the old father found and thought,the children told a lot of lies to deceive him.The old father was not very happy.
So,the old man wanted to go home.But on his way home,his heart disease attacked all at once.
After hearing the bad news,Frank’s children went to the hospital as fast as they can.When frank was saved from death,he saw his children around him except David.Then,he knew David has been in the heaven.He accepted the fact.
At the end of the film,Frank was having Christmas dinner with Rosie,Robert and Amy.Frank said:Everybody’s fine.
I love this movie.It didn’t have any special spectacle,but it also moved us a lot,because it showed a lot of love among family.
纯手写.求加分.impressive 是剧中原文。好吧。。但是生活中（很多美剧里）impressive多用于形容事的（比如What he does is impressive）希望能帮到你