速求高手改英文语法错误或者哪里用词不对

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速求高手改英文语法错误或者哪里用词不对
记忆里的希腊神话\x05
The memory of the Greek mythology\x05
沉默在书柜的一角\x05
Silence in the one horn of the bookcase\x05
遥远的奥林匹斯山一直屹立在希腊\x05
Distant Mount Olympus,have been standing in Greece\x05
亚细亚 欧罗巴只是宇宙的一角
asia,europe are corners of earth\x05
所有的海洋也不过是宇宙中的小水滴
all the oceans just a drip in the universe\x05
传说漫长浩瀚如史诗一样\x05
Legends such as long as vast epic\x05
永生或者死亡\x05
Eternal life or death\x05
神祗也化成了天幕中的星座\x05
Gods also turned to the constellation in the sky\x05
所有的传说已经远去\x05
All of the legend was far away\x05
你相信或者不相信\x05
Do you believe or not to belive\x05
请不要束缚你的思想
Please don't tie up your thoughts\x05
*的精神让你永远与众不同\x05
The spirit of freedom let you different with others forever

1.the greek mythology in my memory2.keep silence at the coner of the bookcase3.the mount olympus has beening standing in Greece !4.asia and europe are just one part of the earth5.all the oceans are ju...