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Children's Day is coming.I'm going to do lots of things on that day.
First of all,I am going to have a picnic with my friends.Then,we are going to the cinema together.There will be a wonderful film.
When I return home,I am going to play with my parents.They are always terribly busy.
Well,in a word, my Children's Day is going to be fantastic.
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Children's Day is coming.I'm going to do lots of thing on that day.
First,I want to buy a watch.Because mines is broken.Then i'm going to watch a film.It seems like a very intresting one.
After that,i'm going to visit my friend.We can play games together and study together.
In the evening,i'm going to eat a good meal with my parents.
What a nice day!I hope Children's Day coming soon!