There is a widespread concern over the issue that (作文题目)But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic

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There is a widespread concern over the issue that (作文题目)But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.
这个作文句型里两个concern我想把第一个改成awareness可以吗 还可以改成什么比较好呢

你是不是要考雅思啊?
我个人意见是concern更好一些,因为他有关心,关注的意思.而awareness是指察觉,一般是危害什么的可是两个重复出现很别扭啊~ 我只是高考.. 在网上找的句型那你这样说In present-day society, the human race is progressing rapidly. (作文题目)is a very important issue in many parts of the world today.不要弄得太复杂,要不反而又背答案的嫌疑