This photo was taken on the evening the day before I went to Shanghai to visited Expo.
问题描述：
This photo was taken on the evening the day before I went to Shanghai to visited Expo.
通不通啊,语法有错误吗?
答
This photo was taken on the evening before I went to Shanghai / to tour /
the Expo.
evening the day 有问题,不用后面的 The day.
另外,TO后面怎么可能有过去式呢?应该是原型呀.
补充：“去掉the day 或者改为 of the day ”错误.