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我用英语提问 请你用英文回答 并指出我问题中的语法或句子的错误
i was deeply attracted by a girl ,who is a classmite of mine.l like her so much,i want to her to be my girlfriend.but i am a failed student,in grade 4 middle school.i want tostudy hard but i couldn't stop the missing of her beauty,what shoud i do?i need your help~

I was deeply attracted by a girl ,who is a classmate of mine.l like her so much that I want her to be my girlfriend.But I am a failed student in grade 4 middle school.I decided to study hard but I cou...