帮我看一下这句话有语法或其他错误么?

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帮我看一下这句话有语法或其他错误么?
翻译:大气湍流下的激光通信信道模拟
Simulation Of Laser Communication Channel under Atmospheric Turbulence

完全正确!但建议将介词of小写,这样就完美了:
Simulation of Laser Communication Channel under Atmospheric Turbulence