英语作文------------------------ 什么地方不好,
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英语作文------------------------ 什么地方不好,
Last Saturday morning ,Mr Chen left home early to go fight .He was fishing all the went home .At the time ,He knew Mir Chen know he did get ang fish was very angry .So he went to the shop ,and bought some fish .After that ,he was very happy to home
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Last Saturday morning ,Mr Chen left home early to go fishing.
But he didn't get any fish at all.
At that moment ,he knew that Mrs.Chen would be angry with him if he took nothing to home .
So he went to the shop ,and bought some fish .
After that ,he went home in happy mood.
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