麻烦帮我检查一下,这些英文句子有没有语法或者拼写错误.

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麻烦帮我检查一下,这些英文句子有没有语法或者拼写错误.
If you come into,call the police.
What are you laughing at?-Don't touch me!
Don't touch me~
How dare you?
Don't say too much to her,it's useless.
Let's go.
Let go of me.
Are you crazy?
Damn you!
What happen?
Doba(name)!
What's wrong with you,Mishan(name)?
Why do you come so late?
She hit my arm.
Oh,look at yourself.
Where is your school?
How old are you?
Go on.There's nothing to be afraid of.
Shut up.
Seem that you need some lessons.
Let her go.
What?Who do you think you are?
Don't you forget the last time Or you want to be beaten again?
Bored hooligan.
You've said that you have no girlfriend.
Not girlfriend.
Don't nag me and mind your own business.
You're nothing to me even if you give me 500 CDs,ok?
Unlucky.
Let's go,my porter.
这是一段电影的台词,有中文翻译过来的,因为是给外教看的,所以需要谨慎一点~如果看出什么不正确或者比较不正常的地方,请一定帮我指出来,

If you come in,I'll call the police.
What are you laughing at?
Don't touch me!
Don't touch me!
How dare you!
Don't talk too much to her.It's useless.
Let's go.
Let go of me.
Are you crazy?
Damn you!
What happened?
Doba (name)!
What's wrong with you ,Mishan (name)?
Why did you show up so late?
She hit me on the arm.
Oh,look at yourself.
Which school are you from?
How old are you?
Come on.There's nothing to be afraid of.
Shut up!
Seems like you need some lessons.
Let her go.
What?Who do you think you are?
Don't you remember the last time?Or you want to be beaten again?
Bored hooligan.
You've already said that you have no girlfriend.
No girlfriend.
Don't nag me.Mind your own business.
You're nothing to me even if you give me 500 CDs,okay?
Bad luck.
Let's go,my porter.
一楼说的对,没有中文,只能猜,跟着感觉走,给你大致修改了一下.