讲解一下这篇英语作文吧!

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讲解一下这篇英语作文吧!
一家知名外企准备与当地*合作修建一所国际学校.为了建好、办好学校,该企业总裁 Mr. White广泛征求学生意见,并公开了他的邮箱地址.请你以“周珊”名义给她写一封E-mail,谈谈你的建议及理由.80词左右
内容要点:
1、学习环境(如:教室 操场……)
2、特色课程(如:网球 钢琴……)
3、…….
参考范文:
Dear Mr. White,
I’m glad to hear you’ll build an international school, and I’d like to give you some advice. I think the new school should be nice and pleasant. Students need bright classrooms to study in, modern libraries to open up their eyes, large playgrounds to play different kinds of sports on. The school may provide students with some special courses, such as art, tennis or piano lessons. These courses can make students relaxed and encourage them to develop freely. It would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they can get some useful experience.
I hope I can enter the school.
Sincerely yours,
Zhou Shan
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从句型、好处、特点、内容来说

首先从整体上来说,本文写的彬彬有礼,非常courteous. 比如说‘ I’d like to give you some advice’ It is a pretty good sentence, I really appreciate it.接下来,我就要具体的帮你分析一下了.第一句话I’m gl...