英语作文 我难忘的暑期旅行 My unforgettable summer trip

(题目The trip to the Great Wall)I went to climb the Great Wall with my parents this summer vacation.I’m glad to know you’re interested in this trip.I’ll tell you as much as possible now.
The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world.It attracts thousands of tourists both at home and abroad every day.It runs across the mountains,like a dragon.
When we got there we were very excited that we began toclimbimmediately.The steps sometimes were very flat,but sometimes very steep.After two hours of climbing,we got to the top at last.I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains andtook a lot of photos.I felt really proud and thought of the famous saying:He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.
If you come to China,I’ll be glad to take you to the Great Wall so that you can appreciate the beautiful scenery of the Great Wall.
语法无错,绝对是范文.